Now we can describe the character who doesn't fit into the group as well:
Mr. Darcy danced only once with Mrs. Hurst and once with Miss Bingley, declined being introduced to any other lady, and spent the rest of the evening walking about the room, speaking occasionally to one of his own party.
This snippet is like the first but it strips out the introduction and conclusion. We dive straight into the features.
Dorothy would steal recipes and say they were her own, only ever talked about herself, refused to follow a pattern, ‘borrowed’ wool from the other ladies when they weren’t looking, and regularly farted.
Clem was painfully stupid, asked far too many questions, couldn’t pick up a crossbow without shooting a bolt through the window, failed the rope test, and would bolt from cover for a frontal attack at the first itch of boredom.
You'll notice that in both of our examples we got carried away and wrote one more feature than was in the original snippet. 🤷🏽♂️
