Contrast/pivot

The next snippet is tiny, not even a full sentence.

It's simply an exclamation that shifts focus from one character to the other, while conveying a sense of contrast:

What a contrast between him and his friend!

It's not a big snippet, but you can still play around with it:

Not like that other lady!

Clem—another story.

  • Try not to use a verb—make it a fragment if you can.
  • Try to communicate that the next character is very different to the first.
  • You can decide whether or not you want to use names.
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