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Let's join these voice drafts together.

Here's Shelley's original:

"Accursed creator! Why did you form a monster so hideous that even you turned from me in disgust? God, in pity, made man beautiful and alluring, after his own image; but my form is a filthy type of yours, more horrid even from the very resemblance. Satan had his companions, fellow devils, to admire and encourage him, but I am solitary and abhorred."

The bedroom-cleaning:

"Galling mother! Why did you make my room so clean that even you are now thwarted from finding my charger? Diamond, in sloth, leaves her room heaped with rags and crumbs, a playground for vermin; but my room you’ve made your clinical ideal, more cruel even from its very sterility. In jail, the guards, your prison parents, must treat their wards with courtesy and respect, but you are tactless and ill-mannered."

The alien abduction:

"Witless Redditors! How could you spam my address so far into space that even you were astonished by my Gammalorian abduction? You, in safety, sit in gaming chairs plush and padded, with mellifluous light and sound; but I squirm in this gelatinous pod, beyond the very edge of the Oort Cloud. Ordinary swatting victims, randoms on the internet, have their doors kicked in by humans, but I’m to be probed by quad-digit blob monsters."

And below is your version, joined together.

You'll need to delete the line breaks to create a continuous paragraph.

Also, this is your chance to make any final revisions and improvements—this is the last activity in the lesson!

Delete the paragraph breaks to create one unified paragraph and make any final revisions.