In the next snippet, we have the trigger that kicks off the whole story:
This is a Highlighting exercise - please apply these tags to this snippet.
However, one day, as Jade Dragon ended the rain and moved the clouds away from the land, she overheard some villagers’ conversation.
"Ah, thank goodness the rain is gone," one man said.
"Yes," another said, "I’m so tired of the rain. I’m glad the clouds are gone and the sun is finally shining."
This snippet begins with Jade Dragon's baseline behaviour and then introduces a trigger, which is going to kick off the first loop.
Here's an example using the same elements:
However, one day, when Mr O'Malley was fitting wastes to the exterior drains to prevent rats from entering, he overheard some students through a restroom window.
"This school is so sterile," said one student.
"I know, right," said another. "It's so boring. It's killing my brain. Where's the personality? Where's the life?"
You’re not logged in!
If you want to save your writing,
and either assign this lesson to yourself or access it via your group.