We've deliberately simplified the highlighting in this snippet.
- First we have Jade Dragon's thoughts and emotions.
- Then we have her behaviour—although this is tricky.
We don't actually see Jade Dragon's behaviour. Her reaction is told as a combination of thoughts and emotions.
But she does stop the rain. This makes for confusing highlighting because you could highlight thoughts and emotions—but then the highlighting would miss the fact that Jade Dragon had done something.
In the simplest terms, this snippet boils down to:
- Jade dragon is angry and indignant...
- So she withholds the rain.
And that's basically the pattern you should follow, though you can describe more thoughts and feelings inside those blocks if you want.