And below is your version, joined together. You'll need to delete the line breaks to create a continuous paragraph.
Is there anything you want to edit? This is your last chance to make improvements before we conclude the lesson!
Make sure you:
- Introduce where we are, using an environment that has science-fantasy elements but is also somewhat familiar.
- Introduce the protagonist and explain their place in the world.
- Have a sense of surrounding activity that is routine.