Observing and describing in Storm Boy 4: Describing a relationship

Describing a relationship

Mr Percival followed

The passage starts with a quick, simple summary. Action and reaction.

Wherever Storm Boy went, Mr Percival followed.

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The rest of the passage gives examples of this simple description.

Ideas - Different things you could do with this passage.

Here are some examples.

While Amelia explored the rubbish tip, the black cat kept its distance.

No matter how much Xavier tried to keep it out, the crow always found a way into the house.

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