Finding a model

With any skill, we first learn by copying other people.

So if we want to write a story that begins with a shocking event, we could find someone else's story that begins with a shocking event and copy them.

For example, here's the opening of Gone:

One minute the teacher was talking about the Civil War. And the next minute he was gone.

There.
Gone.

No “poof.” No flash of light. No explosion.

Gone(2008)

Alright, so that's a shocking event. But how do we use it for our own story?

Like, there's no point copying it word for word, so... what?

Hold that thought; we'll come back to it.

Let's talk about patterns.