Days

Sometimes, we describe historical figures on the scale of days or even hours.

(Usually, we can only do this for modern figures who left diaries or other evidence of what they experienced during a given day.)

Witold Pilecki

For example, Witold Pilecki was a Polish resistance leader during World War II.

He allowed himself to be arrested and taken to Auschwitz so he could secretly write reports about life at the concentration camp.

This snippet from a biographical account describes days in which Pilecki was recovering from a severe illness:

AUSCHWITZ JANUARY 1941

Witold fevered in bed for ten days, dreams looping with waking thoughts, only certain of the passage of light to dark and back again. Occasionally he felt the window open, or a rough sponge against his body and hot soup pressed to his lips. Other patients arrived, moaning and whimpering or else suddenly quiet at the sound of a gunshot or nearby beating. The musicians from Christmas were now practicing a Bavarian waltz for the deputy commandant Fritzsch, the strains of which drifted into the room in the evenings.

By the tenth day, the fever passed and Witold slowly regained his strength. The nurses kept feeding him, and he started to hobble around the ward, until Dering judged him well enough to transfer to the convalescents’ block.

At this level of detail, this recount reads like a story, even delving into Pilecki's thoughts.

This kind of biographical writing is popular because it is vivid and dramatic, unlike purely factual summaries that skim across months and years.

Adventures of Alexander von Humboldt

Sometimes a biography will drill down into even more detail.

Alexander von Humboldt was another great scientist, except his interest was nature and the environment, so unlike Isaac Newton, von Humboldt needed to travel all around the world, collecting enormous amounts of data.

In this snippet, von Humboldt attempts to reach the summit of a massive volcano in the Andes:

Alexander von Humboldt and his three companions moved in single file, slowly inching forward. Without proper equipment or appropriate clothes, this was a dangerous climb. The icy wind had numbed their hands and feet, melted snow had soaked their thin shoes and ice crystals clung to their hair and beards. At 17,000 feet above sea level, they struggled to breathe in the thin air. As they proceeded, the jagged rocks shredded the soles of their shoes, and their feet began to bleed.

It was 23 June 1802, and they were climbing Chimborazo, a beautiful dome-shaped inactive volcano in the Andes that rose to almost 21,000 feet, some 100 miles to the south of Quito in today’s Ecuador. Chimborazo was then believed to be the highest mountain in the world. No wonder that their terrified porters had abandoned them at the snow line. The volcano’s peak was shrouded in thick fog but Humboldt had nonetheless pressed on.

For the previous three years, Alexander von Humboldt had been travelling through Latin America, penetrating deep into lands where few Europeans had ever gone before. Obsessed with scientific observation, the thirty-two-year-old had brought a vast array of the best instruments from Europe.

For the ascent of Chimborazo, he had left most of the baggage behind, but had packed a barometer, a thermometer, a sextant, an artificial horizon and a so-called ‘cyanometer’ with which he could measure the ‘blueness’ of the sky.

As they climbed, Humboldt fumbled out his instruments with numb fingers, setting them upon precariously narrow ledges to measure altitude, gravity and humidity. He meticulously listed any species encountered – here a butterfly, there a tiny flower. Everything was recorded in his notebook. 

At 18,000 feet they saw a last scrap of lichen clinging to a boulder. After that all signs of organic life disappeared, because at that height there were no plants or insects. Even the condors that had accompanied their previous climbs were absent.

As the fog whitewashed the air into an eerie empty space, Humboldt felt completely removed from the inhabited world. 'It was,' he said, 'as if we were trapped inside an air balloon.'

Then, suddenly, the fog lifted, revealing Chimborazo’s snow-capped summit against the blue sky. A ‘magnificent sight’, was Humboldt’s first thought, but then he saw the huge crevasse in front of them − 65 feet wide and about 600 feet deep. But there was no other way to the top. When Humboldt measured their altitude at 19,413 feet, he discovered that they were barely 1,000 feet below the peak.

No one had ever come this high before, and no one had ever breathed such thin air. As he stood at the top of the world, looking down upon the mountain ranges folded beneath him, Humboldt began to see the world differently. He saw the earth as one great living organism where everything was connected, conceiving a bold new vision of nature that still influences the way that we understand the natural world.

This is a long, richly detailed snippet.

Try reading each highlighted colour to see how it weaves different types of information together.

  • Notice how much detail is put into time and place.
    • The snippet zooms in on the final days and hours of von Humboldt's ascent of Chimborazo, but it also jumps back three years.
    • It jumps around Europe and Latin America, then becomes more and more specific in its location, right down to a crevasse 1,000 feet below the peak.
  • The snippet is full of physical action and descriptive detail, as well as quotes.
  • The snippet also explains the significance of descriptive details along the way (why the height of the mountain is significant for this expedition and why this expedition was significant for von Humboldt).

Time to write your own vivid account of a moment from the life of this "historical figure".

To help you, here are some example phrases from the snippets above:

  • Witold fevered in bed for 10 days...
  • Occasionally he felt the window open, or...
  • Other patients arrived, moaning and...
  • The musicians from Christmas were now...
  • By the tenth day, the...
  • Alexander von Humboldt and his three companions moved in...
  • The icy wind had numbed...
  • It was 23 June 1802, and they were...
  • For the previous three years, Alexander von Humboldt had been...
  • For the ascent of Chimborazo, he had...
  • As they climbed, Humboldt...
  • As he stood at the top of the world...
Using one of the snippets above as a model, write 3-5 sentences of vivid historical description of a moment (up to a few days) from the life of this person. Pay attention to when, where, what, and so what.

In July 1927, archaeologist Dr Eliza Cruz discovered a hidden Mayan temple in the dense jungles of Belize. For three intense days, she meticulously recorded every detail of the massive stone face, whose eyes seemed to glow with ancient power.

Dr Cruz spent hours each day sketching the intricate designs, often perched precariously on a ladder made of bamboo and rope. The uneven ground and the encroaching jungle made her task even more challenging. "The humidity makes the ink run, and the light is constantly shifting," she noted in her journal, capturing the physical demands of her work.

As she sketched the intricate carvings and symbols, the significance of the find dawned on her. The stone face represented a deity previously unknown to Mayan studies and the discovery had the potential to reshape the understanding of Mayan religious practices and their artistic expressions.