NERVOUS! Got it?

Here’s our simplified version of the snippet, with the intensifying adjectival group.

I am nervous—very, very, dreadfully nervous...

Writelike

Where is the person in relation to the quality?

I am nervous—very, very, dreadfully nervous...

Writelike

In the simple version, the person is right at the beginning.

 

But where is the person in the original snippet?

True!—nervous—very, very dreadfully nervous I had been and am; but why will you say that I am mad?

Why do you think the person is placed after the quality group? What’s the effect?

Whatever goes at the start or end of a sentence tends to receive more emphasis.

In this snippet, the quality group has been brought to the front of the sentence. That way Poe can emphasize the word “nervous”, putting extra emphasis on the narrator’s state of mind.

(You’ll see that many sentences in The Tell-Tale Heart are twisted so that important words land at the beginning or end.) 

Let’s try a few variations of the simplified version of this snippet.

Nervous—very, very, dreadfully nervous I am...

Sad—so, so, deeply sad I am...

Angry—very, very, violently angry I am...

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