We often describe how things look but forget that we can also describe how things taste, feel, sound or smell. How does the breath smell in this snippet?
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The breath smelled musty and stale and slightly mildewed, like air in an old cellar.
Write a description of how something felt, tasted, sounded or smelled.
Include four qualities, just like in the snippet.
The doughnuts smelled warm and fresh and beautifully cinnamony, like the best stall at a carnival.
What would it feel like to be in this fountain?
Flickr Donald Verry
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