High-concept storytelling in Gone 3: Ramping up

About Standards
Detailed practice
Story - Narrative
Middle years and up
Gone
Michael Grant
high concept narrative
controlling pace
rising tension
worldbuilding
controlling scope
dialogue
crowd dynamics
mobs
escalation
showing crowd emotion
panic
describing a scene
project
scaling up
Purpose
Expand scale to reveal more of a high-concept world and increase tension.
Description
This lesson continues examining the structure of the first chapter of Gone. How does the author increase the scale of the story's event by introducing a crowd reaction, and use this introduction to ramp up the tension? We rewrite the passage looking at each of these details, and end with a checkpoint piece.
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