In the first snippet, we focus on a tiny detail to establish the scene.
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The speedo is like a clock gone mad.
A well-chosen detail can quickly tell us where we are and what’s happening.
Tim Winton uses a strong simile to build drama and emotion.
The traffic is clogged like roots in a drain.
Chestnut is like a bellows blowing hot.
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