Some kind of parade
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"It's some kind of parade. Training for something. They're still there, marching around in slow time, doing fancy stuff with their rifles."
"They're confident," Homer said. "They think they're safe in here."
"They're not," Lee said.
I was stunned. It was one of the strongest statements I've heard in my life.
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