This is a Proofing exercise - please correct the mistakes in this snippet.
But he had no chance. I was never going to miss. I squeezed the trigger. He went crashing through the door, leaving a smear of blood on it. I heard his body hit the hard bathroom floor with a terrible crash. I think he would have broken a bone or two as he landed, but he wasn’t going to be worrying about that. It seems weird to think someone can break a bone after they’re dead. I suppose it happens though, and it may have happened to him.
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