I tried not to
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I tried not to look at the bodies. I checked the one in the bathroom, briefly, to make sure he was dead. The bullet had caught him in the neck, so he was dead all right. I won’t describe what he looked like, but his body wasn’t in one piece any more. I’d shot the other one just below the chest, and he was dead too.
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