This is a Proofing exercise - please correct the mistakes in this snippet.
I tried not to look at the bodies. I checked the one in the bathroom, briefly, to make sure he was dead. The bullet had caught him in the neck, so he was dead all right. I won’t describe what he looked like, but his body wasn’t in one piece any more. I’d shot the other one just below the chest, and he was dead too.
tried not to look at the checked the one in the to sure he was bullet had him in the so he was dead all right. describe what he looked but his body in one piece any shot the one the and he was dead
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