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Let’s wrap up with one last rewrite. In this snippet there are exactly two adverb groups. Your job is to find them and change them into different adverb groups that still make sense.

He listened politely, though not very attentively, while his father took his turn, describing a feeling of worry that he’d had that day at work: a concern about one of the newchildren who wasn’t doing well.

The Giver(1993)
Write your variation here.