Let’s create a checkpoint piece. You can either revise and polish your work from this lesson (we’ve pasted it below) or you can write something completely new. (Your teacher may have a preference).
We’ve highlighted a high-level structure in the snippet, but within that you should try to include:
- An introduction to the object through its physical form
- A point of interest that tells the reader how it's different to what you'd expect
- The character's reaction to the object
- A further point of interest that builds on what has previously been revealed