This experience is about developing an appreciation for words and language.
We've modified a handful of famous quotes, replacing well-chosen words and phrases with more generic alternatives.
In the game, players should try to identify one or more words they think sound vague or weak and replace them with a stronger choice.
The point is not to restore the original quote, instead:
- Develop an instinct for weak choices
- Develop the courage and skill to make stronger choices
The real value is in the discussion after the game:
- Did anyone make any interesting choices?
- To what effect?
The original snippets
R1
She wasn't doing a thing that I could see, except standing there leaning on the balcony railing, holding the universe together. (J.D. Salinger, The Catcher in the Rye)
R2
I took a deep breath and listened to the old brag of my heart; I am, I am, I am. (Sylvia Plath, The Bell Jar)
R3
Beauty is an enormous, unmerited gift given out randomly, stupidly. (Khaled Hosseini, And the Mountains Echoed)
R4
The curves of your lips rewrite history. (Oscar Wilde, The Picture of Dorian Gray)
R5
There are more things in Heaven and Earth, Horatio, than are dreamt of in your philosophy. (William Shakespeare, Hamlet)