For our last snippet in this lesson, let's stay in someone's head.
I could tell from the way she looked at me.
In this last snippet, we don't know what's going on. The character has noticed something, they've had a realisation—but we don't know what it means.
Let's try writing some examples that hint at someone realising something important.
I knew then that this day wasn't going to end well.
I finally understood what she wanted.
What has this kid just realised?
Bobby Chiu and Peter Chan
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