Weather-bitten pillars

The next fragment is much easier.

...with weather-bitten pillars on either side...

This fragment has a simple structure:

…with weather-bitten pillars on either side…

…preposition quality thing place…

 

The phrase weather-bitten is quintessentially gothic: harsh weather, wild animals, harm and danger. Consider the effect if Doyle had said weather-worn, which means almost the same thing but misses the dangerous-animal vibe that weather-bitten has.

 

Let’s write some fragments that use the same structure, and try to come up with some gothic-sounding qualities.

 

…preposition quality thing place…

…with stark cliffs at the edge of the quarry…

…with lightless windows throughout the street…

For the last example I’m going to try and come up with a compound adjective like weather-bitten. (It’s hard to come up with something as spot-on as that, but I’ll try.)

…with mud-soaked carpets over the floor…

You have a go. Try to make it gothic.
Try another one.