Teasing

It can help to think of speech as an action. People don't speak for no reason!

Characters often try to influence each other through their emotions.

For example, when they tease each other.

In this snippet, kids are teasing Mango Delight about her name

“Hey, Tango All Night!”

“What’s up, Mongo de Fright?”

“Man-Go From My Sight!”

“Hey, it’s Strange-o Uptight!”

Mango Delight(2017)

Teasing is basically about lowering another person’s status. It can be affectionate or mean, depending on the context.

“Or are you afraid of little kittens?”

“No,” he said

“Scared they’ll pounce on your tail?”

“No.”

“Terrified that they’ll bop your nose.”

“No!”

“Then there’s nothing to fear from those little kitten lions."

“You’re not wearing that are you?” Tommy said, giving my outfit an incredulous look.

“It’s not that bad,” I said, subconsciously tucking in my shirt.

“Not that bad?” he scoffed. “It looks like you went shopping at the dollar store and asked what was on sale.”

Write your own variation where one character is teasing another. What is the relationships between the characters? Is the teasing good-natured or mean-spirited?

True dat. Dialogue punctuation can be finicky.

Here's a handy guide (or you can just google for dialogue punctuation—everyone has the same questions!)

Dialogue Basics Activity 07: Teasing