Let's wrap up the lesson by creating a checkpoint piece. You can either revise and polish your work from this lesson (we’ve pasted it below) or you can write something completely new. (Your teacher may have a preference).
Even though the passage follows a basic action-reaction pattern, remember to change up the length and structure of each sentence to keep things interesting for your readers.
The variations used in the passage from Storm Boy were:
- Action, reaction
- Action, reaction, expansion 1, expansion 2
- Action, expansion 1, expansion 2, reaction, expansion 1, expansion 2
- Action, reaction, expansion 1, expansion 2, simile/metaphor
- Action, reaction, expansion 1, expansion 2, location
You can try your own variations too—think about how you can add interesting details and descriptions to expand on the basic structure of 'Character 1 does this, Character 2 reacts by doing that.'