Let’s wrap up by trying to write a completely new passage using the arrival at Godric’s Hollow for inspiration.
• Focus on using details to control the reader’s eye:
• Start small, then get wider and wider
• Look around the surroundings
• Show where your character will go next
And think about how you detail the qualities of the scene: can you make a balance between things seeming lovely but also a little spooky or creepy?