The conflicts formed patterns

In these next pages we’ll try to rewrite statements using nominalisations connected by a process.

The conflicts formed patterns which reflected how people were struggling over economic and political institutions.

Rewrite this example using two nominalisations connected by a process.

First look for processes that could be nominalised:

  • The conflicts formed patterns
  • People were struggling over economic and political institutions

Then try to find some nominalizations that make sense:

  • The pattern of conflicts
  • The struggle over economic and political institutions

Then find a verb that could join the two groups (in this case there’s a good one already in the example):

  • Reflected

There are many ways to rewrite this example, but here is the original snippet it was based on:

“The pattern of conflicts reflected the struggle over economic and political institutions.”

Why Nations Fail, Daron Acemoglu & James A. Robinson