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We had a murder a few months ago, and the police came then. An old man killed his wife - slit her throat and left her bleeding down the walls to the shack underneath. By the time they came he'd run and we never heard whether they got him.

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Footsteps approached --a strangely happy-sounding clatter. "Look what I found!" Dan cried out behind them. Amy and Nellie both whirled around, Amy with a finger on her lips, Nellie gesturing toward the collection of spy cameras around them.