Rewrite Exercise

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Look at the construction of this sentence. Rewrite it as if it was a novella.

In our house, Malee was the best pudding maker. She was much more than a nanny to us, she was our friend. And she spoiled us with her delicious food. She made blueberry muffins with buttermilk and baked bread buns with grated coconut and palm treacle inside.